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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 8

szaleniec1000 May 04, 2012 00:25

In which plot happens. Yes, I'm as surprised as you are. As an experiment, I tried reviewing this entire chapter in a single (long) update, just to see if it's still possible. No guarantees that I'm going to do that again. The continuity errors look even worse this way.
( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 8 )

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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 6 part 3

szaleniec1000 Mar 26, 2012 17:11

It's the first day of term, but before that we need an epic dressing sequence.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 6 )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 19 part 1

szaleniec1000 Jul 08, 2011 02:12

Sorry for the delay. When last we left the wacky world of Hogwarts Exposed, Hermione had at long last shown some sign of actually wanting to escape from the clutches of the walking diabolus ex machina that is Damien.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 19 )

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Deserving Chapter 34

szaleniec1000 Dec 26, 2010 11:22

Hope you all had a great Christmas. Turkey sandwiches for everyone! Oh, and Chapter 34 of Deserving.
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